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Friday 17 March 2017

Polyfest


Why we went to the Polyfest!
Remember the T.I.I.C structure.
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Title - Be creative - capture your audience’s attention!
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Introduction - Tell your audience what our trip was for yesterday and purpose of post
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Information -
**Explain your highlights in a logical sequence
**Explain why you think the Polyfest is important for students who participate, their whanau and community
C
Conclusion - Final summarising statement, an evaluation or comment about what you have explained.

Title

Introduction
The first highlight was flavor we got to play games and it was cool we all got tattoos



Information
1st highlight
The second highlight was the rugby ball game it was so cool you have to get the ball in a hole Glennes got it in. but not us.



Information
2nd highlight

Then we went to jenga it was so fun and so cool .




Information
3rd Polyfest importance to students etc
Then we went to make a milk sack it was nice then we went to play limbo it was cool .




Conclusion
I can’t wait for next year because we are going to be going again because we are going to be year eight’s.I love POLY FEST!!!





this is about polyfest

2 comments:

  1. Hi Troy,
    You are all so lucky to have gone to Polyfest! I only went on Friday morning to watch Darius perform and then I had to get back to work.
    My favourite stage is the Niuean stage. I heard Three Houses Down and General Fiyah performed on the Niuean stage on Saturday.
    Did you watch any groups perform?

    Keep up the great work.
    Love Miss Lavakula

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  2. Great plan for your writing Troy, I can't wait to read your final piece!

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