Monday, 30 July 2018

Why snickers The best Chocolate in the world

snickers is the best chocolate in the world.
If you see snickers at the shops i guarantee you
should buy it once you bite into the snickers
you would want to buy more and more the stuff
that’s in snickers is chocolate peanuts and caramel.

Snickers is a brand name chocolate bar
made by the American company Mars,
Incorporated. Consisting of nougat topped
with caramel and peanuts, enrobed in milk
chocolate, Snickers has annual global sales of $2 billion.

It's a crunchy chocolate bar. the stuff that makes it
crunchy is the peanuts the peanuts is the main ingredients
in the bar. It has the right amount of chocolate
and peanuts. the caramel makes it the best
chocolate in the world.

Wednesday, 4 July 2018

New things in 2018

My story if I was in WW2

Show Don’t Tell

Write your own short story/ extract/ diary entry/ letter
 from the perspective of someone involved in the war. You could be a soldier, a nurse, a teenage boy waiting to enlist, a child whose parents are at war….

Use show not tell to make the text more interesting

If i was a teen and i was part of the ww2 i'll be so scared cause we would have to fight for our country's. many men and teens will die in ww2 but it less we will keep our families saff we would fight hard to keep our families safe try to keep them away from danger.

Bullets are coming for me i seen Lenard get pumped in the body now i have something to fight for we must avenge Lenard. I hate to see teens die in front of me. Now it's time to get back out there and kill them all..

Olden days

WALT: make inferences to build a deeper understanding of a text.