Wednesday, 4 July 2018

New things in 2018

My story if I was in WW2

Show Don’t Tell

Write your own short story/ extract/ diary entry/ letter
 from the perspective of someone involved in the war. You could be a soldier, a nurse, a teenage boy waiting to enlist, a child whose parents are at war….

Use show not tell to make the text more interesting

If i was a teen and i was part of the ww2 i'll be so scared cause we would have to fight for our country's. many men and teens will die in ww2 but it less we will keep our families saff we would fight hard to keep our families safe try to keep them away from danger.

Bullets are coming for me i seen Lenard get pumped in the body now i have something to fight for we must avenge Lenard. I hate to see teens die in front of me. Now it's time to get back out there and kill them all..

Olden days

WALT: make inferences to build a deeper understanding of a text.

Thursday, 21 June 2018

Wednesday, 20 June 2018

Deeper Message

This is my drawing about homeless people. as you can see the homeless man is asking for money but no one wants to give money to the homeless man.

Tuesday, 19 June 2018

A thousand words

WALT: get the meaning about 6 word stories and understanding about what the meaning behind it.

6 Word Stories

1)Guns shot-people ran.

2)God gives- so we give back.

3)I want a phone-earn it.

4)Make a mistake-keep trying.

5)Bird can't fly- needs help.

6)Keep trying-till u master it.

7)Don't judge-so early

8)Don't let fortnite-take over you.