This blog is a record of my learning from Pt England School in Auckland, NZ, through to Tamaki College.
Wednesday, 4 July 2018
My story if I was in WW2
Show Don’t Tell
Write your own short story/ extract/ diary entry/ letter
from the perspective of someone involved in the war. You could be a soldier, a nurse, a teenage boy waiting to enlist, a child whose parents are at war….
Use show not tell to make the text more interesting
If i was a teen and i was part of the ww2 i'll be so scared cause we would have to fight for our country's. many men and teens will die in ww2 but it less we will keep our families saff we would fight hard to keep our families safe try to keep them away from danger.
Bullets are coming for me i seen Lenard get pumped in the body now i have something to fight for we must avenge Lenard. I hate to see teens die in front of me. Now it's time to get back out there and kill them all..
Write your own short story/ extract/ diary entry/ letter
from the perspective of someone involved in the war. You could be a soldier, a nurse, a teenage boy waiting to enlist, a child whose parents are at war….
Use show not tell to make the text more interesting
If i was a teen and i was part of the ww2 i'll be so scared cause we would have to fight for our country's. many men and teens will die in ww2 but it less we will keep our families saff we would fight hard to keep our families safe try to keep them away from danger.
Bullets are coming for me i seen Lenard get pumped in the body now i have something to fight for we must avenge Lenard. I hate to see teens die in front of me. Now it's time to get back out there and kill them all..
Thursday, 21 June 2018
Wednesday, 20 June 2018
Deeper Message
This is my drawing about homeless people. as you can see the homeless man is asking for money but no one wants to give money to the homeless man.
Tuesday, 19 June 2018
A thousand words
WALT: get the meaning about 6 word stories and understanding about what the meaning behind it.
6 Word Stories
1)Guns shot-people ran.
2)God gives- so we give back.
3)I want a phone-earn it.
4)Make a mistake-keep trying.
5)Bird can't fly- needs help.
6)Keep trying-till u master it.
7)Don't judge-so early
8)Don't let fortnite-take over you.
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